We had to do 7 intro paragraphs to decide which one we like the most. This is the on I chose.

Questioning-

Have you ever made a New Years, Resolution? If so have you kept it ?
10,9,8,7,6,5,4,3,2,1 HAPPY NEW YEARS! is what I heard in the last 10 seconds of 2012. Personally people in my family don't usually make goals for the new year,but this year I am. My New Years Resolution is to get better grades in school, I will try to achieve my goal by - When there is a test in a subject instead of studying at the last minute I will study threw out the week, also i will try my hardest in every subject, And try to be More organized which i think would affect your grade also.

IceStone
2/5/2013 08:44:27 am

Hello Kitty - Put spaces in between each of the numbers in the ''0, 9, 8, 7, 6, 5, 4, 3, 2, 1 HAPPY NEW YEARS!'' also put it at the beginning.

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G Heffley
2/5/2013 11:44:46 am

You should make sure to capitilize your worrds at the beggining of the sentences and your I's.

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